Monday, 1 April, 2024
Hey, can you believe? It’s already April…I can’t believe.
In last weekend I was very fine and motivated with everything and studying a lot of new things. So I expected that I was also fine today. But actually, I was not fine.
By the way, there are lot of people who don’t care of their health. I wonder why don’t they take care of theirselves.
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Revised Diary
Monday, 1 April 2024
Hey, can you believe it’s already April? I can’t believe it.
Last weekend, I was feeling very good and motivated, studying a lot of new things. So I expected to feel the same way today. However, I was actually not feeling well.
By the way, there are a lot of people who don’t take care of their health. I wonder why they don’t prioritize their well-being.
Explanation of Corrections
1. “can you believe? It’s already April…I can’t believe.” – Changed to “can you believe it’s already April? I can’t believe it.” for smoother reading.
2. “In last weekend I was very fine and motivated with everything and studying a lot of new things.” – Adjusted to “Last weekend, I was feeling very good and motivated, studying a lot of new things.” for better flow.
3. “So I expected that I was also fine today. But actually, I was not fine.” – Restructured to “So I expected to feel the same way today. However, I was actually not feeling well.” for clarity.
4. “By the way, there are lot of people who don’t care of their health.” – Corrected to “By the way, there are a lot of people who don’t take care of their health.” to fix the articles and verb form.
5. “I wonder why don’t they take care of theirselves.” – Replaced “theirselves” with “themselves” and adjusted the sentence to “I wonder why they don’t prioritize their well-being.” for correctness and clarity. (complete)