Google Cloud Certification in English

Monday, 4 April 2024

I’m planning to take a Google Cloud Certification in English. For that I’m learning GCP things in English. And I took several practice exams in English, so far I archived more than 70% score. But I’m very anxious to pass the exam.

By the way, in English, when I want to write year, month, day, and day of the week, don’t it need to put comma between month and year?

Today I made dinner very hardly, which made me very tired. But I have to make variety of dishes to take in sufficient nutorition.

Automatic Correction Results by AI

The correction results are as follows:

Overall Comments

Your diary entry shows good effort in using English to express your thoughts. Keep practicing to improve your writing skills. Remember to pay attention to punctuation and sentence structure. Additionally, try to vary your vocabulary for a more engaging diary entry.

Revised Diary

Monday, 4 April 2024

I’m planning to take a Google Cloud Certification in English. For that, I’m learning GCP concepts in English. I have also taken several practice exams in English, and so far I have achieved a score of more than 70%. However, I am feeling very anxious about passing the exam.

By the way, in English, when writing the date with the year, month, day, and day of the week, it is not necessary to put a comma between the month and year.

Today, I made dinner very carefully, which made me very tired. However, I have to prepare a variety of dishes to ensure I get sufficient nutrition.

Explanation of Corrections

1. “things in English” was changed to “concepts in English” for better clarity and formality.
2. “archived” was corrected to “achieved” for the proper use of the word.
3. “very hardly” was changed to “very carefully” to accurately reflect the intention of the sentence.
4. “nutorition” was corrected to “nutrition” for accurate spelling. (complete)