to be good

Wednesday, 8 May, 2024

I have been thinking how I can be a good person. I want to be a useful person for someone, that is far away as I’m.

Today I went to my office. Our team had a scrum event since it was Wednesday. I was assigned to several tasks. Uh…I don’t feel like writing a diary.

I’m stuck. How is going on my life? I want to be a normal person like everyone else. But how?

Automatic Correction Results by AI

The correction results are as follows:

Overall Comments

It’s great to see you reflect on how you can be a better person in your diary. Consider adding more details about your day and feelings to make your diary more engaging.

Revised Diary

Wednesday, 8 May, 2024

I have been thinking about how I can be a good person. I want to be a helpful person to someone, even if they are far away.

Today, I went to the office. Our team had a scrum event since it was Wednesday. I was assigned several tasks. Hmm… I don’t feel like writing in my diary today.

I feel stuck. How is my life going? I want to be a normal person like everyone else. But how?

Explanation of Corrections

1. “I have been thinking how I can be a good person.” – Corrected to “I have been thinking about how I can be a good person.” This adjustment clarifies the intention of thinking about being a good person.
2. “I want to be a useful person for someone, that is far away as I’m.” – Adjusted to “I want to be a helpful person to someone, even if they are far away.” This change makes the sentence flow more naturally.
3. “Several tasks. Uh…I don’t feel like writing a diary.” – Changed to “Several tasks. Hmm… I don’t feel like writing in my diary today.” To maintain the tone and flow of the sentence.
4. “How is going on my life?” – Revised to “How is my life going?” for correct grammar. (complete)