Wednesday, 7 August, 2024
I’m reading “The Red Zone” by Richard Preston. I have already read two books written by him. I thought “The Hot Zone” was pretty easy for non-native speakers to read, and “The Red Zone” is the following book of “The Hot Zone”. However, I struggle to read “The Red Zone”. I feel it more difficult than “The Hot Zone”. Considering my rule of reading a English book within three weeks, I have to finish reading it by the next Saturday. The rule may fail for the first time… I’ll do best for promise my rule, but I also have to study kanji, English, and Google Cloud… How can I generate spare time?
Today my colleagues discussed the setting of the air conditioner. Most of them set it over 26 degrees, which astonished me. Actually I set my air conditioner at 29 degrees. I assumed that others set lower degrees.
I read a textbook considering English writing, but in this diary, my writing is definitely poor. Although I understand the importance of practice, but poor writing depress me. I’ll make an effort to improve writing. I have another rule to write this diary over 200 words, but sometimes I can’t. The reason of that is that I don’t have what to write, in addition I don’t know how I can write what I want to. This diary already exceed 200 words, so I quit writing here.
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Revised Diary
Wednesday, 7 August, 2024
I’m reading “The Red Zone” by Richard Preston. I have already read two books written by him. I thought “The Hot Zone” was pretty easy for non-native speakers to read, and “The Red Zone” is the following book of “The Hot Zone”. However, I struggle to read “The Red Zone”. I find it more difficult than “The Hot Zone”. Considering my rule of finishing reading an English book within three weeks, I have to complete reading it by next Saturday. This rule may fail for the first time… I’ll do my best to keep my promise, but I also have to study kanji, English, and Google Cloud… How can I find spare time?
Today my colleagues discussed the settings of the air conditioner. Most of them set it above 26 degrees, which astonished me. In fact, I set my air conditioner at 29 degrees. I had assumed that others set it at lower temperatures.
I read a textbook on English writing, but in this diary, my writing is definitely poor. Although I understand the importance of practice, poor writing depresses me. I’ll make an effort to improve my writing. I also have a rule to write this diary with over 200 words, but sometimes I can’t. The reason for that is I don’t have anything to write about, and I also struggle with how to express my thoughts. This diary has already exceeded 200 words, so I will stop writing here.
Explanation of Corrections
1. “I find it more difficult than ‘The Hot Zone’.” – “More difficult” is the correct comparative form to use here.
2. “I have to complete reading it by next Saturday.” – Clarifies the deadline for finishing the book.
3. “I’ll do my best to keep my promise” – Corrects the sentence for smoother expression.
4. “How can I find spare time?” – Makes the question more natural.
5. “Most of them set it above 26 degrees” – Corrects the preposition used in relation to temperature.
6. “I had assumed that others set it at lower temperatures.” – Uses the past perfect tense for clarity.
7. “poor writing depresses me” – Adjusts the verb form for subject-verb agreement.
8. “I’ll make an effort to improve my writing.” – Clarifies the intention for improvement.
9. “The reason for that is I don’t have anything to write about” – Rewords for smoother expression.
10. “This diary has already exceeded 200 words, so I will stop writing here.” – Concludes the diary entry appropriately. (complete)