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March 23, 2023

Health

Thursday, March 23, 2023

It was rainy. But it was warm so I felt good.

I finished a task at work, so now I’m good. But I remained some tasks, so I have to do them tomorrow.

I ate two onigiri and a sarad and chicken for dinner. I ate a lot. It wasn’t good for my health…

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It was rainy, but it was warm, so I felt good.

I finished a task at work, so now I feel relieved. However, I still have some tasks left, so I will need to do them tomorrow. (「good」を使うのは文脈によっては適切かもしれませんが、ここではより自然な表現に変更しました。また、「remained」は文法的に正しいですが、一般的な表現としては「have some tasks left」という形がより自然です。)

For dinner, I had two onigiri, salad, and chicken. I ate a lot, which wasn’t good for my health… (「a sarad」を「salad」に訂正し、省略形の使用を避けました。また、最後の文で「it」を使用することで、主語を省略する代わりにより自然な表現になりました。)

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