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Wednesday, 27 March, 2024

Although it was warm outside, inside home was still cold.

It was the last day of this sprint, so I had much time to write a blog.

Lately, I’m too lazy to do things that I have to and I want to, so I decided to make a plan for each day. Today, I almost did things that I have planned. I hope this remains after tomorrow.

Automatic Correction Results by AI

The correction results are as follows:

Overall Comments

Your diary entry is well-written with clear details about your day and feelings. It’s important to double-check the spelling and use of certain words for a polished diary entry. Keep up the good work!

Revised Diary

Wednesday, 27 March, 2024

Although it was warm outside, the inside of the home was still cold.

It was the last day of this sprint, so I had much time to write a blog.

Lately, I’ve been too lazy to do things that I have to and want to, so I decided to make a plan for each day. Today, I almost did the things that I had planned. I hope this continues after tomorrow.

Explanation of Corrections

1. “inside home” should be “the inside of the home” to be grammatically correct.
2. “I’m” should be “I’ve been” to express ongoing laziness.
3. “did things” should be “did the things” for clarity.
4. “remains after tomorrow” should be “continues after tomorrow” for smoother sentence flow. (complete)