Percy Jackson book 4!

Monday, 8 April 2024

At last I finished Percy Jackson book 4! It was such a wonderful and brilliant and thrilling story! And like book 3, it was bitter a bit. I’m very missing this series and characters, even though there is one more book I should read. I really really don’t want this series to end.

Yesterday(this is diary, but I’m writting about yesterday), I studied very very hard. I have Google Cloud Exam on this Thursday. Besides, the exam is in English… Even I haven’t covered all of the subjects this exam required… By this Wednesday, I’ll study very very very harder than ever.

Today I struggled from the problem of execution speed and used memory of my program. I’m not good at dealing with such problem, but I did as long as I could. I hope I won’t make a bug by my work…

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You have expressed your thoughts and activities well in the diary. It is recommended to pay attention to punctuation and word choice for better clarity and a more polished writing style.

Revised Diary

Monday, 8 April 2024

At last, I finished Percy Jackson book 4! It was such a wonderful, brilliant, and thrilling story! Similar to book 3, it was a bit bittersweet. I miss this series and its characters a lot, even though I still have one more book to read. I truly don’t want this series to end.

Yesterday (even though this is a diary entry, I’m writing about yesterday), I studied very hard. I have the Google Cloud Exam on Thursday, and it’s in English… Even though I haven’t covered all the subjects required for this exam… By Wednesday, I will study even harder than ever.

Today, I struggled with the problem of execution speed and memory usage in my program. I’m not good at handling such issues, but I did my best. I hope I won’t introduce any bugs in my work.

Explanation of Corrections

1. Added commas to separate adjectives for better clarity and fluency. For example, “wonderful, brilliant, and thrilling story.”
2. Corrected “missing” to “miss” for grammatical accuracy in the sentence.
3. Replaced “very very” with “very” to avoid repetition and improve the flow of the sentence.
4. Adjusted “struggled from” to “struggled with” for the correct usage of the phrase.
5. Clarified the sentence structure for better readability and understanding. (complete)