travel and exam

Monday, 15 April 2024

Last Thursday, I had an exam about Google Cloud. Because I did that in English, I was very nervous. As a result, I did pass. I was very relieved. I would like to challenge exams in English as long as I can.

Next two days, I traveled to Chiba. It is anually event that I and my partner stay at a hotel where he loves. This time we stayed in high grade room, where meals were very delicious and special. We were very satisfied with that travel.

Yesterday, I was very tired because of the travel. I was sleeping and playing the game all day. I started the game about Sangokushi. Because of that, I became interested in Sangokushi.

Automatic Correction Results by AI

The correction results are as follows:

Overall Comments

Overall, your diary is well-written with only a few errors. Remember to pay attention to subject-verb agreement and word choice. Keep up the good work!

Revised Diary

Monday, 15 April 2024

Last Thursday, I had an exam about Google Cloud. Because it was in English, I was very nervous. As a result, I did pass. I was very relieved. I would like to keep challenging myself with exams in English.

The next two days, I traveled to Chiba. It is an annual event that my partner and I stay at a hotel he loves. This time we stayed in a high-grade room, where the meals were very delicious and special. We were very satisfied with that trip.

Yesterday, I was very tired because of the travel. I spent the day sleeping and playing a game. I started playing a game about Sangokushi, which made me interested in it.

Explanation of Corrections

1. “did that” corrected to “did”: “I did pass” – To maintain clarity and coherence in the sentence.
2. “I would like to challenge exams in English as long as I can” corrected to “I would like to keep challenging myself with exams in English” – To improve the sentence structure and make it more natural.
3. “It is anually event” corrected to “It is an annual event” – Spell check.
4. “I and my partner” corrected to “my partner and I” – In English, it’s more common to list yourself last when referring to multiple people.
5. “high grade room” corrected to “high-grade room” – Correct hyphenation.
6. “where meals were very delicious and special” – Added “the” for better sentence fluency.
7. “playing the game all day” corrected to “playing a game” – More natural to refer to playing a game in general.
8. “I became interested in Sangokushi” – Provide more context about the game or clarify if it’s a historical reference. (complete)