Kanji day

Saturday, 20 April 2024

Today I should’ve had a piano lesson, but the teacher had gotton sick, so the lesson was canceled. I spend all day at home except for going for lunch and dinner.

I was studying kanji because I plan to take Kanken, which means an exam of kanji. Through studying that, I enjoy understanding kanji and ancient Chinese culture.

I have been reading Percy Jackson book 5. Compare with book 3 and book 4, book 5 is a little difficult for me because the depiction of the battle scene is more complex. But the story line is also brilliant. I really don’t want it to end.

I watched a video about personalized nutrition provided by DW Documentary on YouTube. According the video, how affect when one person eats a certain food is depends on the person’s gene. If it is true, I don’t know what I should eat.

Automatic Correction Results by AI

The correction results are as follows:

Overall Comments

Your diary entry is well-written with only a few minor errors. It’s great to see you incorporating different activities into your day and reflecting on them in your diary.

Revised Diary

Saturday, 20 April 2024

Today I should’ve had a piano lesson, but the teacher had gotten sick, so the lesson was canceled. I spent all day at home except for going out for lunch and dinner.

I was studying kanji because I plan to take the Kanken exam, which focuses on kanji characters. Through studying them, I enjoy understanding kanji and ancient Chinese culture.

I have been reading Percy Jackson book 5. Compared to book 3 and book 4, book 5 is a little difficult for me because the depiction of the battle scenes is more complex. But the storyline is also brilliant. I really don’t want it to end.

I watched a video about personalized nutrition provided by DW Documentary on YouTube. According to the video, how a certain food affects a person depends on the person’s genes. If this is true, I don’t know what I should eat.

Explanation of Corrections

1. “had gotten sick” is the correct past participle form of “get” in this context.
2. “spend” should be “spent” for the past tense.
3. “going for lunch and dinner” should be “going out for lunch and dinner” to make it clearer that you went out to eat.
4. “take Kanken” changed to “take the Kanken exam” to specify what you are taking.
5. Added “characters” after “kanji” to clarify what the exam is about.
6. “Compare with” changed to “Compared to” for the correct comparison.
7. “battle scene” changed to “battle scenes” to match the plural form of “scenes.”
8. Added “how a certain food” for clarity and correct grammar.
9. Changed “when one person” to “a person” for better flow and clarity.
10. Added “genes” for correct plural form and to match the subject of the sentence. (complete)