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Thursday, 8 August, 2024

Since I’ll devote my spared time to read “Crisis In The Red Zone” today, I let this diary be short.

This morning I tackled interpreting English sentences. When unknown words appeared, I retrieved the meanings, meanwhile I usually remain them unknown during reading an English book. This action will help me comprehend the sentence deeply. I’ll keep up it.

I couldn’t study kanji because I was worried about earthquake forecasting. Tomorrow I’ll make much effort.

Automatic Correction Results by AI

The correction results are as follows:

Overall Comments

Overall, your diary is well-written with clear points about your activities for the day. Just some minor grammar and wording adjustments have been made for better clarity and correctness.

Revised Diary

Thursday, 8 August 2024

Since I will devote my spare time to reading “Crisis In The Red Zone” today, I am keeping this diary short.

This morning, I worked on interpreting English sentences. When unknown words appeared, I looked up their meanings. However, I usually leave them unknown while reading an English book to help me understand the sentence better. I will continue this practice.

I couldn’t study kanji because I was concerned about earthquake forecasting. I will put in more effort tomorrow.

Explanation of Corrections

1. Changed “I’ll” to “I will” for a more formal tone.
2. Replaced “spared” with “spare” to correct the verb form.
3. Changed “let” to “am keeping” for better tense continuity.
4. Adjusted “tackled” to “worked on” for smoother expression.
5. Replaced “retrieved” with “looked up” for a more common term.
6. Adjusted “meanwhile I usually remain them unknown” to “However, I usually leave them unknown” for clarity and coherence.
7. Amended “comprehend the sentence deeply” to “understand the sentence better” for clearer meaning.
8. Changed “couldn’t study kanji” for “couldn’t study kanji” for consistency.
9. Adjusted “much effort” to “more effort” for improved expression. (complete)