Monday, 22 April 2024
Why are songs of mine such great? I’m listening to the songs that I had composed long time ago, which are absolutly great. Can’t I never create such great songs? I don’t want to think so. If I try composing really hard, can I create such great songs again?
Lately I’m trying to clean up inside my freezer. Today I used pork which I had freezed long time ago, so-called “ancient pork” for curry. That curry didn’t taste proper curry taste… I shouldn’t foods laid in the freezer so long. In the freezer, there are things which I actually don’t what they are. So terrible.
Anyway, the songs of mine are really great. I can listening to them forever. I’m going to try composing again so that the number of gread songs are increased.
Automatic Correction Results by AI
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Overall Comments
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Revised Diary
Monday, 22 April 2024
Why are my songs so great? I’m listening to the songs that I composed a long time ago, and they are absolutely great. Can’t I ever create such great songs again? I don’t want to think that way. If I try composing really hard, can I create such great songs again?
Lately, I’ve been trying to clean out my freezer. Today, I used pork that I had frozen a long time ago, the so-called “ancient pork,” for curry. That curry didn’t taste like proper curry… I shouldn’t keep food in the freezer for so long. In the freezer, there are things that I actually don’t know what they are. So terrible.
Anyway, my songs are really great. I can listen to them forever. I’m going to try composing again so that the number of great songs will increase.
Explanation of Corrections
1. “songs of mine” should be “my songs” for better grammar.
2. “absolutly” should be “absolutely” for correct spelling.
3. “Can’t I never” should be “Can’t I ever” for proper phrasing.
4. “freezed” should be “frozen” for the correct past participle of “freeze.”
5. “laid in the freezer” should be “kept in the freezer” for better word choice.
6. “I don’t what they are” should be “I don’t know what they are” for clarity.
7. “the number of gread songs are increased” should be “the number of great songs will increase” for correct tense and subject-verb agreement. (complete)