Wednesday, 24 April 2024
In this morning, in my neighborhood, a building was under destruction. The sound was like the earth is groaning or roaring, which made me very scared. Will that happen tomorrow? I want it to end soon.
I would go to my office today, but I was too sleepy to wake up by the time when I usually leave. Besides, it was raining. I should go to bed earlier so that I can wake up early. But in order to keep the rule I had set that I read The Cobra Event 20 pages per day, I have to read it late night(I know this expression is wrong, but I don’t know what to say)
Today out team had a scrum event, which is hold every Wednesday. I was assigned to several tasks. I have little time to do them this week, which makes me a little nervous.
After work I was studying Kanji, and I have finished the first textbook. This is only the beginning of the long roadmap of studying Kanji. I bought next textbook. In addition to that, I bought two Russian textbooks. They are written in English. I’m looking forward to studying Russian in English.
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Revised Diary
Wednesday, 24 April 2024
This morning, a building in my neighborhood was being demolished. The sound resembled the earth groaning or roaring, which frightened me. Will this happen again tomorrow? I hope it will end soon.
I planned to go to the office today, but I overslept as I was too tired to wake up at my usual time. Additionally, it was raining. I should go to bed earlier to wake up on time. However, to stick to the rule I set for myself of reading 20 pages of “The Cobra Event” daily, I have to read it late at night.
Today, our team had a scrum event, which is held every Wednesday. I was assigned several tasks that I have limited time to complete this week, making me a little nervous.
After work, I studied Kanji and completed the first textbook. This is just the beginning of my Kanji learning journey. I purchased the next textbook and two Russian textbooks in English. I am excited to study Russian in English.
Explanation of Corrections
1. “In this morning” was changed to “This morning” for better fluency.
2. “a building was under destruction” was changed to “a building was being demolished” for a more appropriate phrasing.
3. “made me very scared” was changed to “frightened me” for better expression.
4. “Will that happen tomorrow?” was changed to “Will this happen again tomorrow?” for clarity.
5. “I would go to my office today” was changed to “I planned to go to the office today” for a clearer sentence structure.
6. “I was studying Kanji, and I have finished the first textbook” was changed to “After work, I studied Kanji and completed the first textbook” for a smoother transition.
7. “I bought next textbook” was changed to “I purchased the next textbook” for correct grammar.
8. “In addition to that, I bought two Russian textbooks” was changed to “I purchased two Russian textbooks” for conciseness. (complete)