Sunday, 28 April 2024
I’m embrassed… The title of yesterday’s diary was wrong…
This morning I had an online meeting with a student of the university from which I graduated. I answered several questions about the company I’m working at.
I also practiced typing with Russian keyboard layout. The website which I always use was something wrong, so I used another website.
In the afternoon, I went to the piano circle to which I belong. It was held in Nagakute and I played Sonatine No.1 by Siberius. There was a bakery near the practice room, where I purchased a buget, a matcha bread, and a chocolate ring bread. I’m going to eat the baget for dinner. I’m looking forward comparing the taste with the breads I’ve eaten.
Totally I was tired. I want to eat dinner, watch a movie, and read “The Cobra Event” the rest of the day. There were a lot of gross scenes in the book, but I’m really excited and thrilled. Actually, I happened to see the spoiler, so I have already knew the name of villain and who are going to die… But the book is really interesting so I can’t put it on.
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Sunday, 28 April 2024
I’m embarrassed… The title of yesterday’s diary was wrong…
This morning, I had an online meeting with a student from the university I graduated from. I answered several questions about the company I work for.
I also practiced typing with the Russian keyboard layout. The website I usually use was having some issues, so I switched to another website.
In the afternoon, I went to the piano circle that I am a part of. It was held in Nagakute, and I played Sonatine No.1 by Sibelius. There was a bakery near the practice room, where I purchased a baguette, a matcha bread, and a chocolate ring bread. I’m going to have the baguette for dinner. I’m looking forward to comparing its taste with the other breads I’ve had.
Overall, I was tired. I want to have dinner, watch a movie, and read “The Cobra Event” for the rest of the day. There were a lot of intense scenes in the book, but I’m really excited and thrilled. Actually, I accidentally saw a spoiler, so I already know the name of the villain and who is going to die… But the book is really interesting, so I can’t put it down.
Explanation of Corrections
1. “embrassed” was corrected to “embarrassed” for the correct spelling.
2. “university from which I graduated” was changed to “university I graduated from” for smoother flow.
3. “company I’m working at” was adjusted to “company I work for” for more natural expression.
4. “typing with Russian keyboard layout” was revised to “typing with the Russian keyboard layout” for accuracy.
5. “website which I always use was something wrong” was changed to “website I usually use was having some issues” to improve clarity.
6. “Sonatine No.1 by Siberius” was corrected to “Sonatine No.1 by Sibelius” for the correct composer name.
7. “purchased a buget” was changed to “purchased a baguette” for the correct spelling.
8. “eat the baget for dinner” was adjusted to “have the baguette for dinner” for better phrasing.
9. “I want to eat dinner” was revised to “I want to have dinner” for proper expression.
10. “There were a lot of gross scenes in the book” was changed to “There were a lot of intense scenes in the book” for clarity.
11. “so I can’t put it on” was corrected to “so I can’t put it down” for the correct expression. (complete)